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Drabble: Restitution

Title: Restitution
Rating: Teen
Characters:
Ninth Doctor, Rose Tyler, Jack Harkness
Genre: drabble
Words: 100
Spoilers:none
Summary: The Doctor is very annoyed with Jack.
Disclaimer: I am not the BBC. I am not making money from this. (I am, however, having a great deal of fun.)
A/N: Written for Yamx, who needed some cheering up. I hope this will do the trick.  She asked me to use her prompt, "Jack annoys Nine and has to face the consequences".


"Isn't there another way?"

The Doctor glares at Rose.  "'S what he deserves."

Jack kneels in front of the outraged Time Lord.  Cold air flows across his naked flesh.

The Doctor points at the floor.  "You can't do it in that position.  All the way down."

Better not aggravate him further, Jack decides, and sprawls face down on the tile.  He holds his breath, muscles taut and straining.  "Almost.... yesss!"

The Doctor grabs the sonic screwdriver from Jack's hand.  "Next time you want to play in the shower, bring your own toy.  An' check that the grate is in place."

Comments

( 17 comments — Leave a comment )
garpu
Nov. 1st, 2009 07:05 am (UTC)
LOL! and I can only imagine the kind of toy Jack was using it for...
lindenharp
Nov. 2nd, 2009 01:09 am (UTC)
The sonic screwdriver has many, many useful settings, and it can resonate more than concrete. ;-)
neadods
Nov. 1st, 2009 12:11 pm (UTC)
BWAhahahahahaaa!
lindenharp
Nov. 2nd, 2009 01:09 am (UTC)
Yes.
silvermoon_06
Nov. 1st, 2009 02:40 pm (UTC)
Ohh! This was deliciously wicked! Jack is such a naughty boy! The Doctor had to punish him. He he. :-)

Loved this little ditty! Thank you. It made me giggle. :-)
lindenharp
Nov. 2nd, 2009 01:11 am (UTC)
He might have gotten away with being a naughty boy if he hadn't also been a clumsy boy.

Thank you for the comment.
mad_jaks
Nov. 1st, 2009 03:05 pm (UTC)
*snickers*
lindenharp
Nov. 2nd, 2009 01:11 am (UTC)
*curtsies*
canaana
Nov. 1st, 2009 03:51 pm (UTC)
*snickers*
lindenharp
Nov. 2nd, 2009 01:11 am (UTC)
*grins*
wendymr
Nov. 1st, 2009 05:58 pm (UTC)
Oh, poor Jack! And the Doctor didn't even offer himself as a substitute toy :(

ROFL! Nice work!
lindenharp
Nov. 2nd, 2009 01:16 am (UTC)
*grins* Thank you.

Trust me, the Doctor was not in the mood for any kind of game that Jack would have enjoyed. The Captain was lucky that he suffered nothing worse than some frustration and a bit of embarrassment.
yamx
Nov. 1st, 2009 06:20 pm (UTC)
LOL - thank you so much! Jack really should know better than to mess with another man's screwdriver...unless asked to, of course. *g*
lindenharp
Nov. 2nd, 2009 01:18 am (UTC)
You are very welcome. I had fun with this one.

Jack should know better, but he has never encountered a tool that he didn't want to try out. :-)
hab318princess
Nov. 1st, 2009 09:28 pm (UTC)
*giggles*

and my mind needs a shower now
lindenharp
Nov. 2nd, 2009 01:18 am (UTC)
Ah, but what kind of a shower? ;-)
hab318princess
Nov. 2nd, 2009 06:20 am (UTC)
one that cleans my mind from the filthy thoughts...
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